The third essay that I chose was, The Revolt of the Unfit, by Nicholas Murray Butler. In the introduction the author gives general information. His thesis statement is in the first paragraph. It reads, there are wars and rumors of wars in the portion of the territory occupied by the doctrine of organic evolution.
The introduction was not effective because I do not understand what he is talking about. He needs to define the words he uses in hi essay. The conclusion technique that the author used to conclude his essay was a quotation. I do not like quotes at the end of essays because it does not seem to bring everything together.
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